A poem inspired by my recent visit to goa,a coastal place in India and truly a beauty.?

Staring at the horizon


as far as eyes could see


the setting sun


and the unfathomable sea


cool breeze


soothes my soul


god's finest painting


it seems he gave it all


the land of sun,sand and wine


crystal lakes,picturesque hills


truly a sight divine.





goa fu%26lt;king beauty.A poem inspired by my recent visit to goa,a coastal place in India and truly a beauty.?
my God ! You are so good at poems keep it up!I love your avatar by the way who is that person in avatar! Anyways....Heres mine!


Taken by thoughts of these


and i know it is true


That you make me so freeze


But I couldn't flew!


I remained to my feet


When water was cold


I knew you were coming to meet


Before I grew much old!





Composed by:Sana IqbalA poem inspired by my recent visit to goa,a coastal place in India and truly a beauty.?
it's always a toss up between me and some other girl...lol...It's ok ...


@eli like your poem.. Report Abuse

Now even i wanna go to Goa !


Hmmm..But something is missing in this poem...yes i know what , you forgot to mention the girls of Goa !...lol
i like it :)